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  1. Ross Mannell (Team 100WC) at |

    Hello Ady,
    I can see the reasoning behind you words. Despite all of the evidence, there are people who think it doesn’t matter if it doesn’t effect them yet we only have one world we all share. Well done.
    My suggestion would be to take a new line as each person speaks. It helps your readers know who is speaking.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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  2. Cliona Brennock at |

    Well done on your entry this week Ady. I think it is an important topic that we all have to learn about. We need to understand how we each can make a difference.
    Keep learning and keep making a difference to the world.
    Ms Brennock
    Team
    100 w/c
    Dublin Ireland.

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  3. Cath (Team100, Melbourne, Australia) at |

    Sometimes it is difficult to understand things if you can’t see or experience them. I think you have written a story that shows this. The dialogue between the teacher and student worked well. Well done.

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